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October 9th, 2008

A composition

Posted by chimolsworld in Uncategorized

 

 

I asked my form 3 students to write a dialogue about a friend asking another to help with the making of Sugar Cane and Water Chestnut Jelly for a party . I asked to be creative and to write a nice dialogue between the friends. So this is one of the compositions. I had so much fun reading and marking it that i decided to share it with all of you . I will write it as he wrote it so have fun reading .

Suzana : Hai there , are you free?I like to ask you on how to make jelly for my open house this Sunday.

Izzul : Oh yes! I am free alright . Besides, this homework can wait. Ladies first in my priority.

Suzana : Hmm , you so sweet.

Izzul :Oh yes ! This can not compare the sweetness of my jelly. Oh no! The day is getting dark, how about you come to my house alone , tomorrow.

Suzana : Oh my , you are really romantic. Of course I will come.

                    THE NEXT DAY……..

Suzana : Hai Izzul , are you ready ?

Izzul : For what ?

Suzana : Our Date on how to make jelly of course.

Izzul : Oh that , of course I am. Firstly , We must need a jelly powder , sugar , a fresh sugar cane juice and water chestnuts that are peeled and diced.

Suzana : Actually these ingredients are use to make what kind of jelly ?

Izzul : My bad, These ingredients are used to make “sugar cane and water chestnut jelly”.

Suzana : So how might we do it ?

Izzul : Patient my friend . Firstly, we must dissolve the jellypowder in some cold water . Then put the dissolved jelly powder, sugar and cane juice into a medium sized saucepan.

Suzana : Can we change the size of the saucepan?

Izzul : It depends on how big you wanna make it .

Izzul : Next , we stir it and bring the mixture to the boil on low heat. On this you need to be careful because safety first.

Suzana : How touch . Then What?

Izzul : We added the water chestnuts. After that , pour the jelly mixture into a 19 cm by 28 cm tray or a deep jelly mould. Then we can leave it to cool and set . Finally , we refrigerate it and serve well chilled.

Suzana : Its that all.

 

Izzul : Yes, I think that’s all. Suzana : Oh by the way , do not forget to come to my house this weekend.

Izzul : who going to miss it , I know I’m not . See you this weekend then . Bye.

Suzana : Bye .

 

 

 

 

 



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